Goat song needs to have three running plot-elements. It needs separate levels to keep it going. I want weird shit, like maybe the world outside is completely on fire, or maybe people are starting a street-level revolution.
1. Inner-dialogue, figuring shit out.
2. Kitchen dialogue with faun-humans, about their play.
3. Dorm room dialogue with other people, ???
Brynabee- I don’t really know what to say, but I want to say something. I will tell you this:
Often, I dream of a revolution (what is it about I don’t know). I am one of the leaders of the revolution as are many of US (the fam). Anyway we are living out HWY20 it is the future, but it is also the past. Much of the war is played out in the acers behind our house. There is a bar in the woods too, where revolutonaries meet (an old friend is the bar tender). This dream is really long, detailed and complex. Some times my dream picks up where it ledft off somtimes I am at the begining… I have been having for a few years now. What does it mean? Who knows. Is this relavent to your post? Not really. But you mentioned revoultion and weird shit sooo, yeah there’s my weird revolution world on fire I will save us crazy shit.
love you.